Wednesday, November 24, 2010

journey of patience

This is my two voice poem of patience. I choose Odysseus and Penelope because they both took the road of patience and finished the road. The road contained pain but, still they endured it and finished the journey of patience.



OdysseusPenelope
I long to Return to Ithaca,



the sea so challenging and dangerous.




Without

Penelope and Telemachus



My heart feels empty.

2. A gift from Aeolus but, what a hindrance!


I tell myself that


Penelope will be waiting.


Aeolus refuses to help again.





The whirlpool causes a shipwreck and
washes me ashore the island of Calypso.


3. Escape from Calypso, I am finally at my haven.






I Promise on the river Styx I will never

let them have Penelope’s hand.



Only
I

Odysseus string the bow.








4. I Odysseus


eliminate all the suitors.

Finally, there’s only me,

Penelope


and Telemachus.

I

have returned home


I long for him to return



Waiting for Him day after day year after year, I sit and weave.

Without


Odysseus


My heart feels empty.



I miss his smile toward me.

I tell myself that



Odysseus will be back.


I weave by day and unweave by night

I will never choose a husband among the suitors.




I weave by day and unweave by night



I ask the suitors to join the shooting competition.




I Promise on the river Styx I will never



marry the suitors.


Only


Odysseus can string the bow.



Yet a beggar strings the bow,


and




eliminates all the suitors.

Finally there’s only me,


the beggar

and Telemachus.


He
has returned home

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